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  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    October 31st, 2009 at 01:14am
  • iluvcheetahs5

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    Hang in there....I'm trying to come up with ideas
    April 23rd, 2008 at 02:17am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    I liked this chapter! Stupid slut, but at least she knew he wasn't cheating. I did catch some errors though.

    In the paragraph where he's explaining how he did the math problem:
    Well we wanted to find the value of x. The system you gave me was five equals two x squared minus nine x. We subtract five from each side to get zero equals two x squared minus nine x minus five. Then we plug it into the quadratic formula to get nine plus or minus the square root of nine squared minus four times twi times five. I think you meant two, right?

    I say, starting to read them outloud and explain them in simple terms. Just need to space between out loud.

    "We know eachother too well. I knew you were going to show up eventually..." Just need a space.

    Brownie mix is indeed fun, though :D
    April 12th, 2008 at 09:11pm
  • emily the eraser

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    WOOO! Go Dan and Jade! Nothing gets in the way of love!
    April 12th, 2008 at 09:03pm
  • sammi;;

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    You need to updata.
    April 12th, 2008 at 04:32am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    "So...you want to make brownies and eat the mix raw?" she asks.

    "Now THAT sounds like fun!" I say laughing.

    Raw brownie mix good! And that little slut!
    April 11th, 2008 at 03:31am
  • Cold Wind

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    DARLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    April 11th, 2008 at 02:43am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Wonder how he's going to be in school. That should interesting.

    Update when you can, please <33
    April 10th, 2008 at 10:49pm
  • emily the eraser

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    GREAT story! I love it... Every word.
    More?
    March 30th, 2008 at 12:20am
  • HystericxBarbie

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    Yayness! He's free! : ]

    Update soon please <33
    March 21st, 2008 at 05:07am
  • sammi;;

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    YOU DID WONDERFUL!
    I'm glad he's frre.
    yay!
    I got a hug, even though no chlochate.
    :]
    March 21st, 2008 at 02:56am
  • iluvcheetahs5

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    Ryter:
    alsooo???

    If life isn't a joke
    why am I laughing?
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    LOL hilarious :lmfao
    March 21st, 2008 at 01:06am
  • Free Mibba

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    alsooo???

    ?!??!?
    ?!?!?!

    more soon?
    March 21st, 2008 at 12:52am
  • Cold Wind

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    Awesome chapters.....
    March 21st, 2008 at 12:36am
  • Cold Wind

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    Awesome chapters.....
    March 21st, 2008 at 12:36am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 21st, 2008 at 12:04am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    iluvcheetahs5:
    lol haha
    sorry...what would u prefer?
    fishsticks?
    lol idk
    lol
    Actually SURE!!!!!!
    March 20th, 2008 at 11:54pm
  • sammi;;

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    I like it!
    :]
    Write more, and where's my chlochate???
    I want it!
    March 20th, 2008 at 02:21am
  • iluvcheetahs5

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    lol haha
    sorry...what would u prefer?
    fishsticks?
    lol idk
    March 20th, 2008 at 02:20am
  • Breathless Tallie

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    OMG
    O_O
    Great update
    Chocolate stinks though!
    March 20th, 2008 at 12:54am
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