Let's Cheers to This - Comments

Love it. Love Jerry. Also, I never heard anyone say they want more AP classes,but if it means more stories, then fudge yeah!

I'm totally raping all your stories.
xD

That was cute, nice one-short! :)

Ha, I knew this would cheer me up. I'm still pissed about what I was before hand, but now my mood is brightened. :)
Anyways, I absolutely loved it. I liked how cute it was, because it for sure was.
The characters sound great. I would love to meet them in real life, except for the obvious fact that they don't exist. Their personalities seem to clash a bit, but it almost works out best that way.
One thing I did notice, however, was that there was a slight inconsistency in the ages of Noah and Jerry. Jerry said that at the time that he realized he liked Noah, "He was 14. I was 15.". Later on, you have Jerry say, “I’m almost as old as you.” when they were talking about how tiny he was. So that confused me a bit, but it wasn't anything that impaired the effectiveness of the story at all. Other than that, I couldn't find any mistakes, be it spelling or grammar (aside from the on-purpose mistake in the title, lol)
This would be a great full-length story too, if you decided to extend it any.
It's a great little cutesy fluffy story, though with the NC-17 rating, I was expecting something different, if you know what I mean. I did love the fluff of it, don't get me wrong. That was amazing and completely adorable all in one.
I can't find much else to say about this other than the fact that I just utterly love it. Great, great job!

ahhhhhhhhhh LOVED IT!
Noah sounds so fucking hot ^_^
And Jerry DOES sound adorable...
But Grant sounds like my kind of guy ;) why isn't he real, dammnit?!?!
haha, great one-shot!

Oooooohhhh. I love all of your one shots and short stories. And your regular stories. They're so good and cute.
And I loves these two. And Grant, he was awesome. Haha
xox