Dead Memories - Comments

Comment swap brought me here. I'm enjoying the story so far, I really liked the Metallica lyrics in there :) It's sad that Sage lost her mom, even if they didn't have the best relationship. Seeing as I'm not very far in yet, I hope that she can find her father :)

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I really really liked the story, I'm not an Avenged fan or Metallic but this story was really great. You have an awesome writing style. It was different to some of the other stuff I read and it was really good. I'm definitely going to read more of your stuff XD

Hi! I'm from the comment swap. I really liked the story! I'm not familiar with the band though. It's pretty good but the layout kind of bothers my eyes. There's also a couple punctuation mistakes and it was kind of spaced awkwardly.

I am also from comment swap! So, i like this, but i'm not a metallica fan. I like Avenged Sevenfold, but I haven't read anything from them in sooo long. I like the idea, and you're a talented writer. :D <33

Hey, I'm from comment swap :-)

So I'm guessing this is an Avenged Sevenfold fic? Sorry I'm shit with bands apart from Paramore, My Chem, Green Day and YMAS ;-)

Well anyways, it doesn't matter what it is. It was a pretty well written story, but you do have a whole lot of punctuation mistakes, mainly because you don't use a whole lot of it. Maybe you should look into getting a beta?

Good luck with your writing :-)

Cool I like it :)