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  • McKenna Haner

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    Sadie and Jimmy are just so adorable.
    Her mom's in for it from Sadie
    December 31st, 2011 at 04:52am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    Yey
    December 31st, 2011 at 02:01am
  • slumflower

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    Her vagina is too... Open, for my taste
    JIMMY!
    WHAT. EVEN.
    I can't-

    I'm curious as to who her real father is and just why her mother kept it away. I don't know if Jimmy'll get jealous since they've evolved into a real relationship but you never know with him, eh?
    It seemed a little bit rushed to me but I do hope you update soon (:
    December 30th, 2011 at 11:57pm
  • Kiss Me Deadly.

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    I really like this story! Can't wait to see what happens next between Sadie and Jimmy :)
    December 25th, 2011 at 12:12am
  • slumflower

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    Okay so I will admit that at first I kind of disliked Sadie in this full story, because she said that her mother sold her body to give Sadie food and shelter and for Sadie to do that to her mother it would be incredibly bitchy, I just thought Sadie should've been a little bit sympathetic. If she wanted to her mother could've given her into adoption but her mother kept Sadie. so yeah.

    but anyways Ill give u my "wet" panties if u give me ur boxers. Fair enough?
    LMFAO. that was so funny, I swear I started laughing. That is a nice exchange. XD

    btw her friend Fawk's name, it sounds like it's pronounced Fuck. I find that interesting. He's also very attractive XD

    I kissed Brian.

    WOAAAH NOW. woah now. he-llo. and a slight smutty scene with Jimmy when he came home. I was pretty surprised at this, I think she's a bit more like her mother than she wants to admit, but that's just me.

    I like the raunchiness of your sex scenes though, I hate how I can't write like that XP

    Anyway's I think Jimmy should have been a little bit sneakier with his revenge. Tattling's a bit over-rated, but I still liked that he got revenge :3

    I have another question, if Jimmy's so successful (since he is quite amazing in a band) that he's been living with his new wife and Sadie in his mansion why is Sadie's mom still working and is she working as a hooker? She's been called a whore but I didn't catch if she was still working as a stripper.

    I was a bit surprised that she got so angry with Jimmy since before when they had some sexual activities lol, she didn't hesitate very much or protest but I do understand why she did it now that it was actually official sex. If he loves her enough to fool around with her than he can wait until she's 18 or 48 or whenever she's comfortable to have sex.

    I hope you continue your story, it's interesting and I'm curious if Fawke and Angel will be shown as made up or broken up, or if he even told her! Also, I don't think Sadie ever told Jimmy about making out with Fawke when he was waiting for their father/daughter dance thing at the wedding reception.

    :)
    December 2nd, 2011 at 12:28am
  • McKenna Haner

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    Please update soon!!!! Please please please!
    November 21st, 2011 at 03:09am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    Please update soon again! :D
    November 20th, 2011 at 06:41pm
  • Sanndiii

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    Looove, but update soon!!!!
    November 14th, 2011 at 01:02am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Did not see that coming at all
    I'm sure he feels bad though.
    October 31st, 2011 at 08:02am
  • James_Moriarty

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    Jimmy!
    naughty boy!
    I don't think he was being like nasty
    he was just being a bloke
    and blokes think with their dicks xDD
    October 30th, 2011 at 06:36pm
  • SaraHorlyk

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    I LOVED THIS! :D
    October 30th, 2011 at 10:22am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    This...
    IS....
    AFUCKINGMAZING!!!!
    I just love how this story is. most of them are unoriginal and this is just pure amazing.
    You have an amazing writing technique and I love the way you are writing it.
    Dx how dare Jimmy attempt such a thing.
    But also she needs to quit being a cunt about it.
    If I were here I'd let him take me anyway!
    October 30th, 2011 at 06:31am
  • raAwwrrosaurs

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    i just started reading this and i like it but i have a small complaint about the prequel... notting big but it peeved me slightly; the whole thing about there existing a barrier that you break when you lose your virginity is a myth. complete bs.

    but yeah. otherwise i'm thrilled xD
    October 30th, 2011 at 04:39am
  • SaraHorlyk

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    Awh. Please update again! :D:D
    October 28th, 2011 at 06:01pm
  • James_Moriarty

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    HAHA she shouted at that stupid kid!
    I can't remeber his name, even though it was like 5 seconds ago I read it >.>
    October 3rd, 2011 at 12:11pm
  • l2DXtremel

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    Sadie is such an effin bitch! Oh well, I love her anyway. Jimmy+Coffee=<3! Keep em comin, Sweetheart!

    Nae<3
    September 30th, 2011 at 06:06am
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    Yay you updated :) loved the chapter by the way
    I can't wait to read more
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:37am
  • inwonderland.

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    Omigosh, I missed a whole lot. Sorrryyy! Been super busy. School's been kicking my ass. But I love this chapter. Update. I loved the romantic theme. :)
    September 30th, 2011 at 03:05am
  • cindycannibal

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    Love it how u gave angel a makeover lol. I think I need a makeover from u guys too
    September 5th, 2011 at 07:18pm
  • Xxzackysangel6661Xx

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    How could I have forgotten about this story for so long??
    Still loving it by the way
    Please update soon?
    September 3rd, 2011 at 09:11pm