I agree with the user above moi. Paragraphs should have spaces between them. There are users on here who get really anal about stuff like that and they can report you for that :)
Other than that, I liked this story. I'll have to tell you though, that I have no idea who and what the All Time Low band is but still... I liked the story. Great work guys!
Other than that, I liked this story. I'll have to tell you though, that I have no idea who and what the All Time Low band is but still... I liked the story. Great work guys!