A Pack A Day - Comments

I demand that you finish this story. I demand it. :<

This is an interesting story! The interactions with wolves are well detailed but with Leo and Phelan? It's kind of rushed and choppy. The story has potential but just reading it makes me feel as though I'm on a sugar rush.

This story is rather interesting. Although I noticed a pile of spelling errors. You misspelled quite a few in chapter six. This story is pretty good.

Phelan seems like a cool kid, although I'm not a fan of how fast paced it seems to be.

The layout is pretty cool.

You should go back and edit this, otherwise, it's a pretty good story.

I like this story. It's interesting how she's dealing with being away from her pack and since wolves actually are pack animals - mostly - it's cool how this can be related back to real life. I was slightly confused/baffled at how quickly she took to Phelan though. One second he was pointing out a guitar for her, the next she was all over him. I just felt like that was a rather quick jump. There were a few other things like this, but overall I think you have a good story line and a nice style.

The long time and shortness is forgiven, new chapter soon?

Awesome story....i can't wait for the next chapter...!!! :]

thnx

Moonlit love isn't always smooth, and love the new chapter!

which one Birchly????

thats ok ive been looking for a really good story to read, and thanx soo much for your love :)

Really good story, really enjoying it and I want to find out how they sort out all their problems. Would you terribly mind reading my own werewolf story? Just to tell me if it's good and if we should keep it? Loved yours and i'm definately subscribing to it, sorry about my shameful advertising