this actually seems really cool so far. Keep it going eh?
October 18th, 2011 at 03:02am
Hm, I'm liking this so far. Especially the intro, it makes you think about life - something I do often, so right off the bat I was intrigued by this.
It's pretty blunt and straight to the point, which I think is a good factor so far. I'm intrigued as to how the narrator's life will turn out. Great start :')
