Misunderestimation - Comments

ah...

haha

clickety-mouse plague? haha

my sister talks n her sleep everytime iwalk into the room. but i can nvr rly tel if shes asleep or not...

and i cuss in my sleep. lol

update! that was cute

update!plz? thx...

Keep writing! It's good!

Great update. Cannot wait to read more :D

You guy better have sex!!!

wow...

short...

but cool...

didn't really get the whole ending but hey, when do i get anything? and when do ppl get me?

hehe...

ha, it rhymed...

update!i wanna kno what happens!!!

Lol "Hypo-guy-see-mick"... priceless!

I loved this chapter and cannot wait to read more!!! :D

Phwaaahhh YAY!!! They kissed :)

well i just started Reading this like yesterday and i love it very much plz plz oh plz continue

Well,
I just started reading this,
and I like it very much.
Oh, please continue!
=]

second chapter name: Thanks! i made it up myself.. unless i didnt. i dont know, me and my friends did. its old dude.

If you want to give me any plotline ideas, shoot, all welcome, as im not sure where this story could quite go yet.

Chloe

Chapters 2 and 3 were great! Your titles are great for your chapters - it's good you put some thought into them.
I love this story and cannot wait to read more!

I really like this story. Sorry I have no con-crit. :/ But I really, really liked the title of the second chapter. :) *suscribes*

any constructive critism? i need to improve my writing, so any constructive comments or ideas? thanks!
Chloe

Hey this is really good!!!!!!!!!

Keep it up!!!!!!!!

THANKYOU!! aah its great to know that im appreciated. thankyou!!!!! i love you all :D

I really like this story. It's really really good, and I cannot wait to see where you go with it.
You had good spelling and good grammar and you are good at writing!
Write more soon!

**subscribes**