can I just say that I absolutely love this story....especially chapter 7 if only because it reminds me of myself....lol...please update again....i want to know what happens
Loved it... Love that Mike did open up to her, in that masculine sort of way........ Cant wait to she which way their relationship develops. And Seth and Lydia---- gonna be nothin but drama. :) I love Richie :)
I like it! I just never know what to say in the comments haha. I do like that they went to go see FD5. I love the FD series hahaha. I'm eager to see where Lydia and Seth fit into all of this.
Ahhaha so happy to wake up and see this. I like that she got her first win via the shootout, and she def. proved her self to them team. I like it a lot so far. Mike's character is really well written.
I love it so far. I like how you are writing Mike's character. I know he’s gotta be going through it in real life. They are trashing him big time in the media. Its nice to see some real life play into fiction. I also like the pace. Its kinda slow like mine but will help us develop our characters a lot. Keep it up girl.
All stories start out slow. I'm interested to see what's happening now that they're supposed to be civil to one another. I love how Cam attacked him though lol! I would have kept wailing away at his face if that happened to me.
I like where you are going with this and I like how Cam wasn't going to take any crap from Richards. Put him in his place! Keep going you're a really great writer!
I feel bad about not commenting on the last chapter. I'm going to be honest the flyers aren't my favorite team and when someone makes a story involving a female hockey player making it into the NHL I tend to compare it MillerxKane88's story but yours is up there with hers for one of the best ever writen on here if that makes any sense.
Ohhhhhh carts is down to a t. He's starting to like Cam I don't think that will work haha. But seriously it has to be something huge if it's gonna come between richie and carts. They have he longest going bromance going on in the league (at least in my eyes haha). Loved it can't wait for more!