YEA! YOU FINALLY STARTED THE STORY!!! (im a little late ^_^) And Hannah's mom is a bitch. And so is her soon-to-be step-dad. And poor Brian and Hannah. All by themselves, nobody to love them... well, Brian has Pinkly, but, ya knooooow....
I found this story when I was reading one of your others and have been waiting for it since it's been put up. I'm really excited. I love father/daughter stories but this one seems alot better because it's seems more real. I don't know how really. but if I ever had the attention span to write a story I would write one like this. Can't wait for the next update.
So her mother is lying that Hannah is doing alright. Her mother only feeds her jackass of a fiance, the one person that is suppose to be bringing home the bacon to the family but instead he is just wasting the money on gambling. And it seems that her mother loves her fiance more than her daughter. It's going to be all he mother's fault for lying to both to Brian and Hannah because now Hannah has nothing but hate when it comes to her father. I definitely can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved chapter two <3. I feel bad for Hannah thinking her father wants nothing to do with her bc of her bitch of a mother. Can't wait for the next chapter.
I really love the first chapter. I like the way pinkly reacted too. :D I felt the whole chapter was perfect. I especially like the subtle green day reference. :)
I am stoked the first chapter came out. It was amazing. Kim is a fucking bitch and needs to have her daughter taken from her. I hope that Brian will get to have her. I loved this chapter and thought you did good.
So another bitter ex-wife that was trying to get more money from him. Man Kim really doesn't want Brian to be near Hannah for some unknown reason. Now Brian is determine to get Hannah back in his life permanently. I can't wait for the next update! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!