Free Me. - Comments

Amazing. If this was a real book I would totally buy it. I mean it! You left me speechless and what I liked the most was the fact not Kyle and not even Paris forgot about Shane after he died. After someone so close to you dies, it’s not that easy to start a new relationship ‘cause your heart is closed and it takes too much to open up again, and glue together the broken pieces of it. There were a few mistakes here and there but I don’t really care because I felt their emotions completely and it was worth it. I think after a month or two, I would maybe read it again. That’s how much I love your writing.  Keep up the great work. <3

I'm really late arent I? You always manage to make me cry!! I loved how Kyle changed and I still miss Shane, but Kyle and Paris are adorable. I think this story should just be named awesome.

I just caught up. I was gone for awhile with no internet so I couldn't read your updates, but I'm back now and I just finished! I loved everything, it was so sweet:3

Awww, I really liked the ending to this story :)

aw im so sad it's the end ='(

I HATE YOOOOOOUUUUUUU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU ALWAYS MAKE ME CRY AND DAMN IT YOU HAVE DONE IT YET AGAIN!!!!!
I can honestly say one of my favorite stories on here!
I cant even contain my emotions it hurts to see this come to an end
i wanted to keep going on but i know that it will only lead to more tears and more death and more real life shit that i cant deal with

and i know its all fiction but................

i felt connected with these kids!

i felt like i was Paris and i took a trip down this lane the same ways he has and i love you

i cant hate you for writing so amazingly

but i can say you have produced a master piece and i think it deserves to be a fucking book

and you've got your first buyer right here :)

Thank you for letting me partake in the pleasure of reading along in this story and being able to walk with (more like run with) Paris through his life of mis-fortune and hope.

One day , now i have hope to find my Shane or my Kyle and just end up happily ever after
-brandon j.
your number 1 fan

No, no, no, no, no!! Thiswas is my favourite story!
I'm gonna miss it like a momma misses her baby even though I didn't write it.
I'm sure I will come back many more times and re-read this over and over and over again.
<3

i cried a little :')

*bursts into tears* NOOOOO i wish it didnt have to end!!!!!!
it was soo good to let you know

something id like to read would be Dons new life after high school.....just figured id tell you

i loved it! i wanna cry b/c i just don't want it tobe over *sniff sniff*
but i loved the stories and i'm glad you wrote them! ^_^

bhahahah, oh my god!!! ITS THE PRINCIPALS BABY!!!!
only she would sleep with the principal...eww, hahaha

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that bitch stephanie got what she freaking deserved,,damn whore..lol...love the story!!!

yay kyle isn't a daddy!

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHLMFAROFLLOL!
ahhhh the bitch had the principles baby?! I wonder how that baby-making process went.
Her stank trifflin' motherfuckin' ass.

well shit

wait so who is the dad?

That was great xD

Yay! He's not the father<3

bahahahahaha thats great!

YESSS, Justin got the crap beat out of him and he dies!
Kyle and Paris are just too adorabe, I'm glad you didn't kill Kyle :]