Most likely Brian and Matt will be a little confused as to who Judas is, but once they put it all together I think they will freak out, but in a clam way. I mean after all they are smoking, but then again that bit of news may blow their high. Really what Zack needs to do is tell Bronwyn the truth before he hurts her even more. He can't hide Judas away forever.
I feel so bad for Zack, but at the same time I just want him to suck it up and deal with what he has in front of him. His son needs his father and Zack knows damn well that Judas is his, no matter what he says. With everything he's feeling, I can understand why he would want to give the little boy up, but he would feel like crap in the aftermath. I'm keeping my fingers crossed that Zack will do the right thing and be the father his son needs.
I love this story. You put so much emotion into it, that it doesn't seem like another cliche story, i literally feels real. Like this could happen to anybody, and I love that. I can't wait for you to update again :)
For the most part Zack is doing an okay job with Judas. I mean sure he's not the best, but he could be a lot worse. He reminds of my brother when he's dealing with babies.
The first chapter was so heart breaking. I was actually tearing up at the end. The second was just as heart breaking. It's amazing how much truth and realism you've put into this story. There's no cookie cutter plot or cliche twist - its the truth and it happens. This is definitely refreshing to read. The third chapter has now gotten me excited for what you plan to do. I hope you update soon. :)
I got chills reading this update. It's insane how life-like and compelling this story is. Everything is well thought out and it all comes together very nicely. Now that Judas is with Zack, I can only hope that Zack is willing to step up to the plate and be the father he needs to be.
Charmedluna sent me to this story and....Wow. I'm hooked. I actually loved the lack of Dialogue because I felt that it was a better fit. Giving up the child....there are no words necessary. I can not wait to see what's in store for this
I loved this update. I really like how you write Judas, he's so adorable. Great work and I look forward to the next update to see where you will be taking the story. :)
I'm so ready for this to take off. I started tearing u reading everything that Jacob had to go through. It had to hurt more then anything in the world to give up Judas