Get Your Finger on the Trigger - Comments

i thought i did put paragraphs in... :( im sure i did i did wordssssss enter tab worrrrrdsssss...

I really like this story, I do, however the only major turn off was the fact that I was reading blocks of text. This is a real cute story, honestly, but it's all a block of text. Which hurts on the eyes and turns lots of people off reading any further. I barely managed to push myself into finishing this, honestly.
Just a word of advice, you should start spacing out your paragraphs. I do believe that it can get you reported, I'm not one hundred percent sure....

Hope you're getting better ducky!!

Great ending to a great story :D <3

That was such a cliffhanger! I really hope he says yes! Just because gee has a daughter with Emma-Lee, which is cute btw :3

Ohhhh and preeeeeeeeeeeetty pleeeeease write a sequel.

Fuckin looovd it. Short or not it was greeeeat.
Mikes is back home. Their brother relation is restored and...... Frankie asked him to be his boyfriend. I totally hope he says Yes.
Love ya

Woah big cliffy! Gah I cant wait for next chapter! This is awesome!!

ahhh please write a sequel for this, love it sooo much<3

Just came back to mibba after a long while :(
Your story is amazing, i've loved every minute of it :o
can't wait for the next update! :3 <3

So much to absorb in the last two chapters!? Gerard has a kid!? how the hell!? ( well I know how babies are made but thats not the point and.....) meh! Poor Mikey! Yay a mibba convention would be awsume :D, yay coookies, and skittles! I love Frankie coz he has a secret stash of skittles. sooooo adorable! and you're hair is smexy! ( that didn't mean to sound pervy honestly!!!) :3

Mikey it's time to come hooooooooooommmmmeeeeee.

I loooooved it. And I totally think the same about us bi people
Love ya

I think it's great! But it's quite confusing, 'cause one minute Gerard has black hair and just got signed, and the next minute he has red hair and is listening to Danger Days... but apart from that I love it!

I want to do the fact thing too! o;
Ummmmm. Well, you probably already know my name lol so.
I'm from Chatham, Ontario. (Canada, if you didn't know.)
I'm going to be 15 on September 30th.
I'm bisexual.
This story is awesome, by the way~

Oh and my forth fact is ......(drumroll)..... I'm bisexual too

Ohhhh my shizzzle. This keeps gettin better and better if that's even possible.
Love ya
I can't fuckin wait for the next upydate

ehhh my name is Zoeeeeeeeeee ( but with less eeeeee's)
ermmmmmm I Like cooookies
I live in scotland.
this story is awsume! <3 xx

Ohhhh wait. My name is Angely
I have a cat
I'm crazy as shiiiit

I think Mikey leaving is making Gee realize that it was taking a toll on Mikes and he'll want to get better faster. Buuuuut that is makin Mikes think he doesn't care about him and it's better off without him when it's not truth.
Love ya