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  • violet vixen.

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    awwh that was cute and fluffy!! well the ending was, haha..
    At first I wanted to bitchslap Gerard for cheating, burger he wasn't cheating so it was all good in the end!!
    And Frank had every right to think Gerard was cheating, by the way he was acting. Actions speak louder than words!
    seriously loved the ending cause Gee got Frankie a puppy! How friggin' cute is that! It is very cute!!

    love you <3
    xo.
    May 25th, 2011 at 02:27pm
  • lame sauce

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    At first I was like >:O
    Then I was like o_O
    And then :'D
    That was so adorable! I loved it !
    May 23rd, 2011 at 07:46am
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    I LOVED IT
    Love ya
    May 19th, 2011 at 09:02pm
  • KimmaLoveLaugh

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    Aw that was so adorable! I was getting so sad and like my chest was aching when i was reading it. I was like....you stupid stupid Gerard! I hate you!
    But then when it was a puppy I got all excited and I was smiling and I physically relaxed. lol. :D
    You're great! I love you. :D
    May 18th, 2011 at 04:43am
  • Bubbleloveworld

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    Oooooohhhh me loves it!
    May 18th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • DryIce.

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    I'm so happy I took the comment virginity too :D
    xxx
    May 17th, 2011 at 01:17am
  • DryIce.

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    OMG.
    That was so cute, and I mean totally adorable.
    I really love how you managed to weave the lyrics of the song through your chapter. It was refreshing :)
    And I actually nearly squealed aloud when I realized it was a dog Gerard had bought him. Oh my days that was so god damed adorable.
    And yes I do believe it was just as good as your stories, only I think your BBBB update was more descriptive, yet this had more dialogue so there was a balance between the two different things I read :D I think you confuse 'on' and 'in' a bit, though.
    On is for when something rests on top of another object. In is where a person or animal is within something. Like the laptop rested on the table, or the chips were in the microwave- that's the only thing I notice in your updates that isn't gramatically correct and honestly you whack out sentence structures better than me and my only language is english!!
    Trolololololol.
    Up until now I thought english was the only language you spoke. On Facebook I thought you and your friend had a made up language on that status, I was like DUDE I wish me and my friends did that. Now I realize how blonde I was being... So, WOW for writing this well if you speak two languages- I'd get so confused!
    Love you SugarMuffin <3
    xxxx
    May 17th, 2011 at 01:17am
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