I apologise if this sounds harsh but I don't like this story at all. I know this is supposed to be fiction but why would Harry be at an airport without his security, that whole mum/sister thing hardly happens to anyone in real life, why wouldn't they an ambulance, why would they be so casual about her staying with them, and I don't believe that anyone would go around crying and shouting most of the time like this girl. I just think the style of this writing is fairly immature. I was forced to stop reading after 3-4 chapters
March 3rd, 2013 at 02:53am