Hey, you're actually a good writer! I haven't got too far into the story and I'll finish it later, but so far so good! The chapters aren't too long, which is a nice break from all the heavy reading I've been doing today, and I can't wait to see when Peydon and Haven meet in person. I have a feeling Hales is Haven. Ps I love the fact that Hales was wearing a Black Parade top, that made me smile :)
July 12th, 2012 at 09:33pm
