My advice? Well, I WAS with my best friend but I realized I can't be with him because I need him to be the best friend. The one that threatens my boyfriends, the one I go to with boy troubles, ect. So yeah... :p
I can't believe his dad was sending him away!!! I see right through that he just trying to get Jake awy from Hunter. Ugh. (But you are doing a great job! Update again)
Devon is an asshole!!!! I can't believe he did that and then just when I started to like Seth he ruined it ugh. I feel so bad for Hunter but then he should have tried harder to fight back. Jake is so understanding :) He really is a good guy, no matter how he looks he is beautiful just by his personality. This story is amazing and I am so glad that you wrote it. Your a good author, I hope to see your work in a bookstore one day, you could make it a goal.
But- whoa. Wasn't expecting that. Well. I still hate the fact that Jakes all over Sawyer. But I like that Sawyers not into him. He's Hunters. He is. <___<