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  • synsdeepinmyblood

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    I love this and the prequel too! :D
    June 2nd, 2012 at 05:22pm
  • Spoileddxbrat

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    Love this!(:
    May 20th, 2012 at 05:23pm
  • chelcie

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    Like oh migosh!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!!! Love this story and the prequel!!!!! Please update!!!!
    September 7th, 2011 at 03:29am
  • MoMo_92

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    im so upset because i just learn about the prequel of this sequel and i absolutely loved that story it was sad, funny, lovey dovey, dramatic and now im reading the sequel and i love it as well its like looking behind the scene on what else was going on before the prequel began brilliant...can't wait to read more update soon
    August 17th, 2011 at 07:43pm
  • hachie

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    OMFG I am still laughing my ass off for this chapter!
    I mean a drunk Hayden really fucking awesome person to hang out with because she will make you laugh until you feel like you're going to die!!!!! X3
    I bet those were deep secrets she was holding until hyped up barbie came in the picture!!!!
    The way she described the way Brian in complete details made me want just die from laughter!!!!!!
    I FUCKING LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    At least Matt beat the shit out of Brian for breaking his twin's heart and getting them thrown out of Hayden's concert because Matt wanted to pummel Brian for taking a shank to Hayden's concert where she performed all the songs that are based and dedicated to Brian because he inspired her so much.
    Thank you so much for making my night!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 05:28am
  • candice

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    Great chapter! Think i will read the 1st one again!!!! LOVE this story
    June 2nd, 2011 at 03:47am
  • Ms.Plague

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    LMFAO I LOVE HAYDEN DRUNK!!!! funny thing is that is how I am drunk too. I say what I mean and not realize it lol Can't wait for more!!
    June 2nd, 2011 at 02:28am
  • hachie

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    OMG I cannot stop laughing right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    It seems to me that Brian's expectation for girlfriend has completely went down the drain after he stupidly ended his relationship with Hayden.
    Like, that skank doesn't even know the right of Hayden's band!!!!
    I am still laughing because Brian has completely fucked up big time.
    I mean seeing another ~coughs~ slut just month after Hayden and his relationship ended is completely messed up.
    Because Brian claimed that he loves Hayden more than anything and he is already picking up girls.
    Now things are more awkward between them if not more. XP
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 27th, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • hachie

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    Wow that came and bit Brian in the butt, for ending things too early between.
    Now things are awkward between them since they have been away from each other for a while.
    And now Hayden has to worry about recording since they are done touring.
    I give Brian some props for trying to get Hayden to hang out with him.
    I bet she didn't think she would run into Brian at that university but she did.
    SO that's when Brian decides to become apart of the Avenged family.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 03:10am
  • candice

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    Really liked this chapter.. I find a lot of writers let the leading man back with a sorry so i thought this was great! She totally stuck up for her self!
    May 25th, 2011 at 01:26am
  • hachie

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    Wow I cannot believe Brian jumped the gun right away.
    No wonder they both had so many problems in the future is because Brian didn't stop to think before he fucking acts.
    Because Hayden was going to wait until they both finished high school, so she could be with Brian more since she is going to go on tour.
    Now he is feeling like a complete ass for breaking up with her when she was thinking about Brian all this time but he completely mess things up.
    Since now she is single, all the other jocks are going to be going after her since Brian isn't there to fight them off and she is going to be an upcoming rockstar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    So that's when she started to work out so she can wear those low cut shirts.
    Brian should definitely keep fighting for her and let her know that he made a mistake for ending things with her.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 23rd, 2011 at 05:21am
  • hachie

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    OMG!!!!!
    ~died from laughter~ First of all, Brian's dad making him get a job so he can earn his money to support himself and at a fast food place too!
    I know from experiences, those place are hell, especially when you get a stuck up customers that just seems to want everything perfect! XP
    At least Hayden visits him and makes sure that he didn't die from frustration!
    So this is where Brian is reminded that Hayden is an independent girl and that has ambitions and she won't be a stay at home girlfriend.
    The last part made me laugh so freaking hard, Brian and Hayden really going at it then Matt screams for them to stop since it's his younger sister that is getting screwed!!!!! LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    May 20th, 2011 at 12:10am
  • Hello.Love0588

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    Kick ass story! Fucking hilarious! :))))))))
    May 19th, 2011 at 05:55am
  • hachie

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    OMG I freaking laughed my ass off when I read this chapter!!!!!!!!!
    First of all, Jimmy and Brian nicknaming themselves and then Hayden totally dissing them.
    Aw Brian said the three words to her and promised that he would say it to her when he is sober!
    LOL I bet Jimmy already knew something was going on between them both since he was easily distracted by seeing some ducks.
    Hayden is totally right, when everyone finds out that they are an official couple, they are going to keep cock blocking them as much as possible, especially Matt!
    Man breaking Brian's right arm so he won't be able to get off if he does hurt Hayden.
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 19th, 2011 at 03:57am
  • mrgn94cb

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    This right here has completly made my day!!! Im soooo happy you've put up a sequel!!! Cant wait for the next chapter!
    May 18th, 2011 at 12:55pm
  • Ms.Plague

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    AHHHHH YESSS!!! I FLIPPING LOVED THIS STORY AND THIS JUST MAKES ME EVEN HAPPIER
    May 18th, 2011 at 07:22am
  • hachie

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    OMG this chapter can't get any cuter and adorable!!!!!!!!!!!!! X3
    Brian complaining about not doing his cal homework so he ended up copying Hayden's instead!
    So they kept their relationship a secret from everyone since Brian was known as the man whore and Matt didn't want his sister getting tangled up with him?
    I understand but at least they both confessed to each other that they "like you" like you each other.
    Aw Brian getting jealous that Hayden went to prom with one of her senior friend!
    HE IS FREAKING CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Man Matt is going to rip Brian another one when he finds out that his little sister has been seeing him secretly and now they are a couple!!!!!
    I can't wait for whatever adventures will be reveal in Brian and Hayden's life before they became famous artists, when they were rebellious teens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 18th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • hachie

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    I am so interested!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I would love to read more about what happened behind the scenes in Don't Speak!
    To be honest I was really surprise when you announced "Don't Speak" had a sequel!
    Maybe we read about some parts from Matt's POV from the time he turned his back on his sister!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE POST THE FIRST CHAPTER SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    May 18th, 2011 at 04:19am