This story was sooo cute. I loved it. You detailed it so beautifully. I only found a few mistakes. I really liked the layout too. I also liked how the story was somewhat realistic. I think in the real world Kyle would have denied everything. But what do I know? The story was still unbelieveably adorable(: Last I could say is keep writing and never let anybody ever tell you different.
Oh holy, that's just the bejingles! hehe. It made me all fuzzy inside. At first at was like yeah, fight all you want tension's so obvious, you just need to stop and kiss already. And then BAM! Haha, didn't saw that coming though I had a hint since this was rated NC-17 after all.
awwww. I fucing loved that!!!! It was so sweet:D Two amazing quotes from this that i just LOVED: "Shut up and get drunk with me." and "It means I love you too." amazing:D