I hope you know you about gave me a heart attack at the end of it the big "THE END". I was like NO! This can't be The End! Thank god for sequels!! (: (: Amazing story!
i really like this story! but, there seems to be no progression in it. it seems like chapter after chapter all that is happening is her and james go on a date. please update soon :D
chapter 5. i don't know why, but i pictured Ben to be British. lmao...and blond. until you said "taylor lautner" I liked this chapter. she seems to be really close to the other guys. That's sweet. :D And I love her and James together. It's great that he respects the fact that she wants to take things slow.
Chapter 4: Didn't seem like a filler. More like a "reflection chapter". haha. I'm glad she was okay with the kiss. i think she may have liked it. lol. Wonder what's going to happen next.
Chapter 3: Yay. He confessed. That was a sweet chapter. I think I like them together. He seems nicer than Derek. lol. But I wonder how she'll react to him kissing her like that. A bit forward...XD
Comment for Chapter 2: I'm such a fail. I don't know who any of these guys are. *googles them* Oh...some of them are kind of hot. XD Okay. That makes it better. haha. Okay. So I like Logan and Bobbie's friendship. It's sweet. As for James, I predict he likes her. But we shall see. ^_^
Comment for chapter 1: Aww. That was kind of sad. She was so nervous and then he just broke up with her. :( That must suck to go to their special place and then just be dumped. Oh well. Reading on.
I really like this story. (: And I'm sorry to hear about you having gotten sick in Chapter 5's Author Note - that must have sucked. /:
I like the story, and the guys seem to match their real-life personalities as well. (: I just wish you'd elaborate a bit on how Bobbie knows BTR. I also think the story moves pretty quickly, but aside from that it's well written with a nice plotline.
I'm subscribing and looking forward to the next chapter. (: