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i've really loved reading the first few chapters of this and i really hope you update soon :)

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This is truly amazing, All Time Low are my favourite band and this fanfic just touched my heart, please update soon! I just really love the way you've describe the plot of the story and characters perfectly so far, it's a shame there's only a few chapters as I'm dying to read more! I can really relate to this fic too, another reason why I love it, keep up the incredible work!

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This is truly amazing, All Time Low are my favourite band and this fanfic just touched my heart, please update soon!

This is truly incredible I have to leave another comment expressing it. :)

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This is truly amazing, All Time Low are my favourite band and this fanfic just touched my heart, please update soon!

Love it <3

This story is simply amazing, I don't know what else I can say, other then I'm truthfully looking forward to the next update you put out. You really have a way with words, I love how well you can show emotions, not many writers seem to have that ability these days. Kudos to you. :)

(: Another good chapter! Your wording is getting a little poetic though. It's very... flowery isn't the right word, but you're using a lot of figurative language in one place and it's making entire paragraphs that can be skipped over or skimmed because tl;dr. But the content is still really good (: And being descriptive and flowery is better than just complete dialog ;D I'm glad Alex and Devyn are alone finally though. (: Now they can settle into being a happy little family :|

Love it <3

aww I love this story :) it's so cute. I agree with bflynn9 about the whole Devyn and Heath thing

I have this feeling about Heath... I think that's the one. Either way. The one who's all pissy. They're together or something aren't they?! D: Poor Devyn seems... torn. And Alex talking to the baby about how he's in love with her was adorable. Another well written chapter. It's just a bit confusing with so many random people in their now. But Alex is feeling overwhelmed by them, too, I'm sure so it works I guess? Either way, I loved it. Update soon (:

Love it. I'm gad Alex is finally getting some help. I feel kinda bad for him with everything that happened and it's not easy to raise a baby. Update soon please <3

I am just in love with your writing style. I love what you have so far.

My favorite songs off Dirty Work are Guts, Heroes and My Only One :)

Love it <3

And once again I'm impressed. (: You didn't disappoint. I was getting frustrated though, wondering when he'd just pull his head out and say yes. He really can't raise a baby on his own. xD I'm just glad he put Lisa in her place. She didn't want him, she felt sorry for him. That was all. Devyn seems genuine in wanting to help him (:. Anway. Awesome. Update soon please. (:

And god I love so many of the songs off of DW xD My favorites are probably Just The Way I'm Not, Forget About It, Daydream Away, and That Girl. Oh! And No Idea. I personally love the new album and would like to smack every single "fan" who hates it because its not "the same". ><

I have to say I'm really impressed. The fact that the chapter was long and had actual writing not just vapid dialog was great. I'm excited for you to continue though honestly I'm a sucker for stories with babies so I probably would have read it even if it was crappy. However, since I'm actually commenting on it means it was not crappy and I actually feel the need to encourage you and make sure you update ;D Alex is gonna have his hands full it seems and I'm intrigued as to how this other girl is going to play into things.

That was good

This is amazing. You really are a wonderful writer. Update soon please <3

I totally agree with shutupstevie
Your writing ability is phenomenal!!
This story is awesome.
Can't wait to read more!
I've subscribed :)

Devin, I'm always pleasantly astounded at your writing abilities. If I'm being completely honest, it's as if you're miles ahead of many of the other authors on Mibba, so much so that you completely hold my attention for about thirty minutes straight, for that's how long these chapters take to read. :P I get Alex Gaskarth in this story, even though I have no idea what it must be like going through what he is going through. You do a phenomenal job with character development, even in third person. I've subscribed. :)