I HAD TO READ THIS ONE. I adore Elemental fics. It reminds me of Avatar: The Last Airbender. Of course, you had to go and make this a fanfic with Brendon, Spencer, and Ryan. I swear, any pairing out of those three really makes me happy. You’ve converted me with, like, everything. I adore how one’s got fire and one’s got ice, and then poor Brendon in the middle with nothing. It’s so cute and funny at the same time. xD
This paragraph made me crack up:
Spencer’s winning and he knows it; there’s a smirk sparking in his vivid blue eyes and his hips are cocked at a careless angle like he shoots balls of fire at people every day. (Sadly, this is kind of true.)
I don’t think I’ve ever mentioned before, but I really do love how you use present tense most of the time. I think it really helps with making everything feel real, as I’ve so often discussed.
Gah, once more, poor Brendon! Frozen in a block of ice. –shakes head at Ryan and Spencer for being dickish-
I want more of this. I feel like it would be a fabulous chaptered story. <3 Haven
This paragraph made me crack up:
Spencer’s winning and he knows it; there’s a smirk sparking in his vivid blue eyes and his hips are cocked at a careless angle like he shoots balls of fire at people every day. (Sadly, this is kind of true.)
I don’t think I’ve ever mentioned before, but I really do love how you use present tense most of the time. I think it really helps with making everything feel real, as I’ve so often discussed.
Gah, once more, poor Brendon! Frozen in a block of ice. –shakes head at Ryan and Spencer for being dickish-
I want more of this.