Thank you! And I read your blog. I understand. I've been through that. I handled it in another way, which may or may not have worked, but I know what you've been feeling. <3
Yup that's the intention :P The beginning of the story is all very unclear because that's how she's experiencing everything, now the actual story begins! :D
I really like this :D The only advice I have would be grammar, but I really like the story line and everything. (I love how you included Tim) Please update :)