Hi :) I just started reading this I'm on like ch. 4 but I just wanted to say that the story started out great. I have one small critique though. Kagome looks like Kikyo and Anya has a huge hatred for Kikyo? So why is Anya so nice when she first meets Kagome? I figured there would be a lot more tension between the two.
other than that it's amazing so far. Thanks for writing a great Inuyasha fanfic!!
OMG SOMEONE FINALLY PUT DOWN A STORY ABOUT INUYASHA!!! I'M A HUUUUUUUUUUUUGE INUYASHA FAN! AND I MOST CERTAINLY CAN'T WAIT 4 YOUR UPDATE!! NO FORGET THAT!UPDATE NOW! XDDDDDD
OMG!!! <333 First Inuyasha fanfic here XD!!!! You like NEED to write more, I am LOVING this with all of my HEART! One question, how does Rin know Anya? And when does this take place? Are they still looking for the Pearl pieces? I'm a bit confused >.< And oh, make sure you read your writing and stuff because I can see a few errors here and there, but you know, nothing too serious :)