You butt nugget!!!! They almost kissed!!!! And then that lovely song was playing!!! I had the visual all in my head and you ruined it!!! I lovers you!!! Keep it up doll
I really like your story, and there are more stories I want to put on the list, but the link thingstake up a lot of space... Hmm... Maybe I just won't do links... *shrugs* I don't know...
I actually like it, hoping for the plot to be great. :) Maybe a little more description of the environment and the characters.
Also, at the end of Chapter 2, it was mentioned there that the person Trey bumped into had an MCR shirt, but at the start of Chapter 3, he had a Misfits shirt on? Confusing. o_e
I like it and think you should keep it. I'm glad I hit the backspace buttom when I look for new stories to read! :D I hope there'll be a new chapter soon?