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  • Chaotic Lover

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    As I read this it's raining outside and I'm listening to Thunder by Boys Like Girls. I looove this one shot! < 3
    July 19th, 2011 at 10:57pm
  • bloodybunny

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    I've always loved thunderstorms.

    I love them even more now. And that's a good idea to try out next time when hitting on someone :D
    May 30th, 2011 at 09:01am
  • we are criticized.

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    I wish I could have been the first to comment. ):

    This is so beautiful bbb. I loved it and you have to know the smile it put on my face when I read it in the car on my birthday. It was one of the best gifts. ♥

    You're beautiful.
    May 23rd, 2011 at 08:52pm
  • DryIce.

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    OMG. I loved this, it was just... adorable.

    A clap of thunder forces the question out of Frank's mouth, as if those would be his last words. “Are you in love right now?” He whispers, closely pressed against Gerard's chest, his lips almost touching against his throat. Gerard swallows, and swears that he can hear the little molecules vibrating in the spaces in-between. This part left me breathless, your little description at the end topped it off nicely <3

    The storm finishes but Frank doesn't lose his grip on Gerard's shirt, twisting the fabric close to him. Gerard now brushes the hair from Frank's eyes and they both smile, because their not-so-secret has been spilled, and God knows how long they've been keeping it.

    “I think I love thunderstorms.” Frank says softly, rubbing his nose against Gerard's.

    Gerard gives a dry swallow and holds Frank tight, feeling the light warmth of his skin underneath his fingers. He's touched Frank a thousand times, but it's never been quite like this; as if the very texture of his skin is morphing underneath his fingers. His. The rain is less insistent now, just a drizzle in the quiet night.

    His lips graze Frank's forehead, and he can hardly even manage a whisper. “Me too.”
    I actually couldn't pick a paragraph out of all of these that I preferred, so I thought, you know what? Fuck it, I thought they were all masterfully written so I'm going to Cntrl V the lot into the comment. So yeah, a beautiful ending to a very unique little one-shot. I loved it plain and simple, it made me feel all happy inside :D <3
    Love you wifey wife!
    May 22nd, 2011 at 04:06am
  • KimmaLoveLaugh

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    I would like to take your brain and like....have it. You're amazing. I don't know how you do it. Every story you write it fantastic. Um, this was adorable, It's good to have assertive Frank sometimes. :D :D
    May 22nd, 2011 at 02:58am
  • IvytheOdd

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    Beautiful, just beautiful.
    May 21st, 2011 at 09:13pm