I Pinky Promise - Comments

Well, I just read through this all. I mean, it wasn't bad. The plot line was good but there just wasn't enough detail. It went really fast, as if you were rushing to finish it. The characters seemed a little under developed. I'm sorry that I had to be the one to say it. Maybe no one else noticed and I'm just being really critical. But...yeah.

:((((((( Its ending.
This chapter was sad, yet awesome.
I bet Rowan really is beautiful.:D
Her birthday reminds me of another person's birthday.. ;)
Thanks for the shout out buddy! :)
You could have finished without me, you just wouldn't have someone nagging you about it. haha.

this seems like a well liked story and i have to say it is pretty good. i would like to suggest to you that you separate the dialogue of each person, it can be as simple as just one space between them. i find it hard to read when both people are speaking in the same paragraph, but just a suggestion! and i really like your story banner, it is very nice. one other thing, i noticed it alot in the first chapter that you don't always capitalize your I's. as you can see, i'm not in this comment, but it's more important in your story. i hope you see this as ways to improve and not ways to knock you down because i'm just trying to give constructive criticism. hope this helps! and good luck!

No! Mikah can't be dead, poor reagan, poor kelsey, poor mikah's mom! Is this the last chapter, it would be cool with a chapter about the baby

Loooved it.
Though it made me sooo freakin sad.! Gaaah. :((((

Wow this is so good I love it but don't let him die that would be so sad I know what it's like to see someone u love Die from a brain tumor so this story hits close to home with me please update soon love this

yeaa but i might stop writing this one for a while because im losing ambition to write this one.

Love the story, have that Mikah has to die :'(

Uh well i thought of him, so who knows what he did to me. maybe it was so agonizing thinking up the perfect guy for Reagynn. Oh what now.

Yeah, you should feel bad. What did Mikah ever do to you?! Huh?!
Anywaay, this was a great chapter.! Can't wait for the next one. :DDDDD

Yepp.

Another great chapter, it's great that her mom is being supportive even if she doesn't like the situation

Haha mine too. and yeaa he's a dick fersure. but hes outta there now.

Loved it. Her dad's a dick. He reminds me of my dad. ahahaha.
Can't wait for the next one. :)

calm down dude haah

Damn. I got beat again! haha.
He was kind of harsh to his mom. But I guess she deserved it.
I'm glad he's going to help with the baby. :D
He better not die before she has the baby! -.- I'll be upset if he does.

Ya know i hadnt thought of them getting married but maybe.

It's not awful, are they gunna get married?

Im not sure if i want her to get pregnant.

Really awesome, Mikah can't die!!! Is Rea gunna get pregnant?!