Institutionalized - Comments

Trinity reminds me of Emilie Autumn a little bit. You should check her out and see if I'm crazy or not. xD Anyways, I'm glad to see you've updated. :D

This story is amazing! Please write more soon! I can't wait to read (:

Hmmm, this story was actually very interesting in regards to the POV the story was being told; the main characters. I really liked the the readers could see the consequence of one's actions on the family members. The ripple effect was told in very good detail...at least in my POV it was. XD
I also like that the way the story is told, it's reflective.

I've only read the first few chapters, but in a certain way I feel that this story is eye opening.

When I first read your comment with the title of the story, my first thought was of the song Institutionalized by Suicidal Tendencies. It's a really good song ^-^
Back to the story. The layout, I really cannot say anything about the layout. I suggest creating one specifically for the story, because the premade layouts kind of scare readers away.
I did not see any grammar and or spelling mistakes in the story itself, so good job.

This is awesome!

Hope you continue this story. I like it. :)

This is an awesome story so far. I can really relate to the main character, seeing as I went through the same thing a few years back.

This is very well written, and I love your writing style.

Keep up the good work. I'm subbing :)

But if I hadn’t gone through what I went through, I wouldn’t be as strong as I am now.

Mikhail - russian

Hey, I'm sorry it took me this long, i'm at work and was juggling my reading with taking calls.

I really really like this story. The way Lily does try suicide but regrets it ;) (cause it makes her seem strong and not emoish; no offense to anyone a bit emo) and I love Trinity's character :D Mikhail is a very cool name btw, and I like the fact that he is russian :D

all in all i love it and i am definetly subscribing.. and looking forward to the femmeslash part :B

Ugh, I love the first chapter. It describes how I felt a few years back. Just wanting the pain to end.
Good job dear.

Trinity is beautifully crazy. xD I do believe she is my favorite character, even though you just introduced her. x3

Woah, this is really good. ^.^ I'm actually writing something along these lines myself, so that kind of struck me. xD Anywho, this really was great. Not a single grammatical error I could spot, save for a single airy typo. I love the first chapter, laying it out that the story is going to be told from her now-self. Make sure not to change tenses in later chapters, as I've noticed a lot of authors do that. To be honest, I had no idea what to expect when I clicked on this story; but I'm glad I did. It's very good, and I do believe I'm subscribing. ^.^