Keep Your Enemies Close - Comments

Alright, I just have to say that this is one of the cutest things I've read in a while.
I definitely love this story and all things associated with it.
I love how it's flashing back and forth between their past and their present. It adds a certain level of...not really professionalism, but a word similar to that. I think even if you would have written it in a more chronological order, it would have been great, but just not as great.
The characters both had amazing personalities and I just fell in love with them both.
The way they interacted with each other was awesome too.
The bar scene, I could completely see that happening. It was a little cliche, yes, but some things are cliche for a reason, right?
I just utterly and completely loved this, and I honestly don't know what else to say.
I couldn't even find any spelling or grammar issues, so hats off to you on that one.
Seriously, amazing job here.

(By the way, I'll join your Zombie Apocalypse team for sure. Let's get some meetings going or something lol)

LOVED IT!
They were both such colourful characters ^_^
Oh, just so you know, I'd definitely be on your Zombie Apocalypse team =]
Ready with an axe and a crossbow, whenever the time comes!
^_^
but seriously, I loved the one-shot =]

I really enjoyed reading your story. It was adorable. :)