Update!!! i heart this story, so if not for me then for the fact that school is hard and this is an escape from a difficult reality! GCSE's dun dun dun :P
okay! so i think gerard SHOULD find out and help her, from there a wild hunt.. but they shouldnt get caught :D i luv the update,and i belive that there shouldnt b a fbi pov,maybe thay hear a very deatail news report though? cause itd be weird plus ud hav to come up with police names. well thts just wht i think! so u should update!:D <3
Ugh you should have like 200000 comments. This is really good and I definitely look forward to my inbox being flooded with news that this has been updated^^