Sandcastles - Comments

not enough jonny in this chapter! need more! why wasn't he at the beach with amber? why hasn't bailey punched amber in the face yet? forget throwing the frisbee into the water -- i would've busted that girl's teeth with that frisbee. :)

amber is a bitch! im glad she got up and i wonder what is going to happen at the wedding tomorrow. also pat is such a good guy!

Thanks for updating so soon, i absolutely love this story!

I love this chapter!!! Please update soon ;)

ahhhhhh!!!!! quit leaving us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!!! omfg. i am just so wrapped up in this story, it's crazy! please update soon!!! p.s. i follow you on tumblr and i read that you needed to get some aggression out and wanted to put it into the next chapter and DAAAMMMN girl. that's some aggression!

ahhhhhh!!!!! quit leaving us hanging like that!!!!!!!!!!! omfg. i am just so wrapped up in this story, it's crazy! please update soon!!! p.s. i follow you on tumblr and i read that you needed to get some aggression out and wanted to put it into the next chapter and DAAAMMMN girl. that's some aggression!

ohhh drama drama drama! please update soon i want to know what is going on!!

Oh damn. Drama is on the way! Please update soon....maybe another tonight? please

Great story! Can´t wait for the next update!

omg! i kind of felt vomit come up my throat at the possibility that that hoe-bag got jonny drunk to hook up with him. a;ldkjf;laksdjf;lkadjf;laskdjf!! stupid hoe-bag!!!! also, who opened the door? a 2nd hoe-bag? update again soon please!!!!

uhoh! update soon i cant wait to see where this leads!

heeey....biggest fan here,

OMG! I.NEED.MORE.!!!!!!! assss iff you just leave me hanging like that. ugh. stupid amber. what a slutty name too. lmao! i'm looking forward to seeing where you take this with amber thrown into the mix. i foresee a drunken hookup somewhere in the future :S

Ah she preggo and I love the chapter! I want to see where this all leads!!

bahahah! i knew it!!! PREGGGOOOOOS!!!!! i feel so SMRT! :D

once again, outstanding chapter!!!

even though you say the gf isn't a dig at tazer's girl, i'm going ahead and picture it as such because i find it hilarious. also, i'm trying my best to live in a world where jonathan toews isn't into fake, blonde, janice-from-the-muppets, lookalikes :D

keep the chapters coming!!!!

ps. i have a jonny story that i've started to write. it's nothing much, just 2 chapters, but it's a start. check it out and tell me what you think! <3

great story!!!

another update so soon!! i love itttttt!!!!!!

p.s. sara's totally preggers.

pps. jonny and kaner in jail .... heheheheh. LOL!

keep the updates coming!!!

love the update!!!!

that last scene gave me goosebumps. <3 <3 <3 update sooooooooon!!!!!

p.s. why do i have this feeling that Sara is preggos?

(saw your link on tumblr) totally LOVING this story!!! love it love love ittttt!!!!!

drama drama cant wait to see what happens :)