Interesting start...I like the way you give just enough detail to leave the reader wanting more. It's nice and easy to read, but still compelling. I did notice a few minor spelling errors, but nothing that distracted from the reading the story. I look forward to reading more to find out what's going on!
YOU'RE BACK!! I'm excited that you're writing again - out of all the stories that get neglected, this one saddened me the most about not being updated! I wonder who this English guy will be! :O
I would love to read more of this! It's really very interesting. I would love to see some more character development. I can't wait for the next update! Consider me a subscriber!
I'm not sure what your plans are for this story, if any at this moment or ever, but I was looking through my current subscriptions and regonized this one right away. Revisit? :)