oh em gee. she said william... i think you're hinting that liam's gonna be abusive to? saying 'i love you' seriously and after her just saying william, i think shits gonna go down. .. amazing story, keep it up.
I think its totally stupid to stop a story that people enjoy even if it is one person who cares. its just selfish of you for stopping a story because no one comments. Anyways I like it so keep updating!
Nooo pleasee you have to finish this storyy:(((...And I think Melanie still loves William...but please finish this story Don't stopp:(( you're story is so great
The story just seems like its going around it circles at this point I hope things get cleared up soon. Also all people complaining about comments does is make me not want to comment. There are stories with 400 readers that get maybe 2 comments a chapter. Its not that big of a deal.
Oh shit... I think I know where they're going. I still wanna kick Liam in the balls and chunk them in the ocean. :) that sounds like a good idea.. Yea.
See HE DIDNT LOVE HER IF HE WAS ABLE TO FIND ANOTHER WOMAN!!! -_- I hope you know if you get them together again. I will find you and gouge your eyes out with a spork. And I ain't kidding either. So yea. I'm keepin' my mind set on Darren even if god were to show up in the story and wanted to be with her. Her boyfriend just doesn't settle with me either.