I LOVED the ending!!! :DDD! Seriously, the sex scene was pretty realistic. Sorta. :) You are an EXCELLENT writer. Seriously, I can't get over the adjectives and adverbs--truly remarkable. Keep up the good work, let me know if you write more!
This is by far one of the best story's I have ever read here on Mibba, (Tom Riddle fictions that is)
I loved the development between everone, and I truly loved the plot. I mean Mr. NoNose had to have another side to him.
And this story did a wonderful job at portraying both sided of Tom Riddle at Hogwarts, both trying to get to his master plan, and also not knowing what to do about love.
Beautiful ending, my thought of her being the lady for a lord is outstanding. Now, I now people think she is going to be pregnant, but my thoughts are she shouldn't be, but maybe later on if you continue the story with a sequel. I do have other ideas but it's a very long list XD.
Omg, I loved it! And, I know they get married because of how you wrote it! :) Me gusta!!!!! A sequel would be nice, but I don't think you ended it terribly. :) <3