Tranquility - Comments, page 24

Star Angel (100)

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wow i feel sorry for her that would be hard please update soon

June 4th, 2011 at 08:35am

stormy nights (100)

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i love this... i feel sorry for lia though :(
update when you can and please do it soon :)

June 3rd, 2011 at 03:10pm

so unintelligent; (100)

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I liked it :)

June 2nd, 2011 at 04:57pm

so unintelligent; (100)

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Definitely keep it :]
& recommendation?
I think you should keep the story in one or the others p.o.v.
I personally like Nick's p.o.v. better, but it's just a suggestion.

June 2nd, 2011 at 05:02am

goldenlampshade (100)

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It's great! Can't wait for you to write more :)

May 31st, 2011 at 11:28pm

so unintelligent; (100)

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It's honestly really good, and not at all cliche :]
Let's keep it that way?

Subscribed.

May 31st, 2011 at 10:49pm