*Here from comment swap* I am really happy comment swap sent me here. I loved the story, and really want to read the rest now! I was super sad when I saw it hadn't been updated in almost a year. To be honest, I'm not usually one for fantasy, but I really enjoy this story. I love the character Maria. She always seemed brave and confident, but she still had flaws, such as her short temper, which made her seem like a real person. I also loved the idea of Simon having a crush on her, that was really clever, and I really want to see how it turns out. The story line was really well though out and kept you interested, which is hard to do without making the story too brief. The only criticism I have is, you may want to proofread it a bit. I noticed a lot of typos all through out the story, especially in the last chapter. I can relate to that though, I make so many typos, there's probably some in this comment. Other than that, nice job! If this were a novel I would buy it!
March 4th, 2014 at 02:00am