May 10th, 2012 at 05:47am
Aww you posted this on my birthday! Greatest birthday present EVER!
I thought this one shot was so cute! It made me squeal (a very MANLY squeal) at the ending.
This makes me want to read more!
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June 8th, 2011 at 07:51am
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This made me all tingly inside.
<3May 29th, 2011 at 05:53am -
AWW!!!!!
This is too fucking cute. :3May 25th, 2011 at 05:46pm -
actually, i quite love cliched :D
that was so adorable! i must say, i loved how you opened it up. talked about Gina, then had Dylan talk about himself. i love how you put in your quote/secret, and as weird as this sounds, i can sorta relate to Dylan. i mean, i don't wear glasses and am not a 'nerd,' but you like someone, and they are with and seemingly in love with the one person who's you're opposite of, i guess like Gina.
i dunno, your character was just very relatable.
anyway. my favorite line was when you said, 'my skinny jeans are sufforcating my balls.' heh, i literally laughed out loud at that point.
i also like how he guesses he's gay, and how it's really not that cliche when Miguel tells him he likes him. it's actually sorta original, and they don't jump into a make-out session like stories normally have couples doing.
i thought this was wonderful, and really really cute, so yeah (:
also, thanks for getting it in on time :DMay 24th, 2011 at 07:11pm -
okay okay, this is fucking cute ^_^
He went through a whole change, just for a boy?
That's dedication!
I loved it =]May 24th, 2011 at 10:41am -
Aw. this is so cute! I love it. <3May 24th, 2011 at 05:52am
This is just... amazing.
Really. Really. It's fucking awesome!