Aww you posted this on my birthday! Greatest birthday present EVER! I thought this one shot was so cute! It made me squeal (a very MANLY squeal) at the ending. This makes me want to read more!
actually, i quite love cliched :D that was so adorable! i must say, i loved how you opened it up. talked about Gina, then had Dylan talk about himself. i love how you put in your quote/secret, and as weird as this sounds, i can sorta relate to Dylan. i mean, i don't wear glasses and am not a 'nerd,' but you like someone, and they are with and seemingly in love with the one person who's you're opposite of, i guess like Gina. i dunno, your character was just very relatable. anyway. my favorite line was when you said, 'my skinny jeans are sufforcating my balls.' heh, i literally laughed out loud at that point. i also like how he guesses he's gay, and how it's really not that cliche when Miguel tells him he likes him. it's actually sorta original, and they don't jump into a make-out session like stories normally have couples doing. i thought this was wonderful, and really really cute, so yeah (: also, thanks for getting it in on time :D
This is just... amazing.
Really. Really. It's fucking awesome!