sounds like an awesome day in the making. =) disneyland.. wow, I've always wanted to go, but the chances for that are as big as John walking in my front door right now (looks over shoulder. nope, still at zero..) other than that, good chapter and I'm looking forward to more.. =D
of course it's okay =) well at least I think so! other than that, a cute chapter and I wonder why she suppresses every bad memory right now? I don't know is that's what she has to do, to deal with things or if there's soemthing else behind it. I guess, I'll have to wait and see if the answer will coem to me..
well that went down fast.. maybe pull things a little longer? so it's not just drama on drama. but you get a feel with it, making it more believable. but that's just my oppionen. :)