thanks!! :D I love how Keith is like 'well whatever' and is all chill when Nick is being a smart ass. chapter 5 is most likely coming tomorrow. :D stay tuned for more of Nick's adorableness. <3
Can haz. But only if I can haz Keith AND Ellis. <3
You have no idea how hard I laughed with "Lazy Day Sexy" and the rules. Oh goshness. This just keeps getting better and better. Nick is such an adorable smartass, I'm in love with him. <3<3<3<3<<<<3
I love them too. :D And really? I was worried I didn't get it.... thank you!!! :D I know right, I was like well the zombies are all dead so what other adventure can I take them on?
I feel the same way!! :D I got a good idea of what he looks like (thank you members of deviantart!). And I just figured it would be some asshole-ish teasing thing he would do, considering Ellis' stories seem to piss him off alot. XD
You've hit Nick and Ellis's personalities so perfectly well. :D I just love them. sjfklasjfk;lsd AWWW just. <3 I love this story so much and YAAAAAY ROAD TRIP!
I can't believe Keith is coming along. When we hear so much about him in the game, I totally want to meet him. Oh man, this is gonna be interesting. I love how Nick insinuated that Ellis was gay.
First thing that I will say: I like the title, I don't know why, I just do. :) The summery is pretty good, and the chapters are a pretty good length. You wouldn't think of a zombie apocalypse as original, but this seems kind of unique. I did notice something with the paragraphs, though: check the mibba guidelines.
Okay, I'll do another chapter. Yhea, I know the grammar thing but I was half awake and i HAD TO FINISH IT. I'm brewing up the next part right now, while im in school.
Well, don't feel rushed. I could nitpick at this and be a grammar Nazi, but Nick was so damn cute I don't care. He's just adorable and perfect and I WANT HIIIIM.
Keep up the amazing work, lovely.
May 25th, 2011 at 04:47am
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