Dice, Vanderbilt, and a Shot of Scotch. - Comments

  • Eden.

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    Awesome - this is really great - your writing is just so Happy face I love it - Nick is just hilarious tehe
    May 31st, 2011 at 10:33pm
  • Aria T'Loak

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    You can have Keith and Ellis, I just want Nick. <<<<<3

    This chapter was as adorable as the rest of them. :3

    Nick is so funny. xD I'm glad Jamie's there to calm him down.

    MENTION OF THE ELEVATOR THAT WAS SO FUNNY! lmfao

    Write more!
    May 31st, 2011 at 05:08am
  • Peikko

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    thanks!! :D I love how Keith is like 'well whatever' and is all chill when Nick is being a smart ass. Cute chapter 5 is most likely coming tomorrow. :D stay tuned for more of Nick's adorableness. Arms <3

    Can haz. But only if I can haz Keith AND Ellis. Cute <3
    May 28th, 2011 at 06:09am
  • Aria T'Loak

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    AHHH FJDA;LFKJASK

    You have no idea how hard I laughed with "Lazy Day Sexy" and the rules. XD Oh goshness. This just keeps getting better and better. Nick is such an adorable smartass, I'm in love with him. <3<3<3<3<<<<3

    Do want. <3
    May 28th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • Peikko

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    I love them too. :D And really? I was worried I didn't get it.... thank you!!! :D I know right, I was like well the zombies are all dead so what other adventure can I take them on? lmfao

    I feel the same way!! :D I got a good idea of what he looks like (thank you members of deviantart!). And I just figured it would be some asshole-ish teasing thing he would do, considering Ellis' stories seem to piss him off alot. XD

    I am, I'm starting 4 right now. Arms
    May 28th, 2011 at 04:02am
  • Aria T'Loak

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    You've hit Nick and Ellis's personalities so perfectly well. :D I just love them. sjfklasjfk;lsd AWWW just. Crazy Crazy <3 I love this story so much and YAAAAAY ROAD TRIP!

    I can't believe Keith is coming along. When we hear so much about him in the game, I totally want to meet him. lmfao Oh man, this is gonna be interesting. I love how Nick insinuated that Ellis was gay. lmfao lmfao

    I just love this. :3 Write moar. Arms
    May 28th, 2011 at 03:50am
  • solo sunrise

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    First thing that I will say: I like the title, I don't know why, I just do. :)
    The summery is pretty good, and the chapters are a pretty good length. You wouldn't think of a zombie apocalypse as original, but this seems kind of unique.
    I did notice something with the paragraphs, though: check the mibba guidelines.
    May 27th, 2011 at 05:03am
  • Peikko

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    Okay, I'll do another chapter. Yhea, I know the grammar thing but I was half awake and i HAD TO FINISH IT. Arms I'm brewing up the next part right now, while im in school. Cute
    May 25th, 2011 at 04:20pm
  • Aria T'Loak

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    Smiley I want more. NOOOOW.

    Well, don't feel rushed. I could nitpick at this and be a grammar Nazi, but Nick was so damn cute I don't care. Smiley He's just adorable and perfect and I WANT HIIIIM. Smiley

    Keep up the amazing work, lovely.
    May 25th, 2011 at 04:47am