I just found this story (sad that it took me this long :( ) It was really good and I enjoyed reading it! Very well written, and its very rare to find a story on here that is like it.
thirteen: Will he be able to understand why she said no? Will they be together after? What are the others going to do at Chuckie Cheese? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
eleven: Wondering what will happen at the beach; will he believe her? or will he break her again and make her leave? Can't wait to read the next chapter of a great and awesome story.
eight: Liked the swimsuit; although it's too revealing for my taste. What I would have given to see the expression on Zacky's face. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
seven: Well, I liked it so that means my opinion overrules your opinion (jk). Loving this each time that I read it. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
two: Loving this the more that I read it. Wondering what will happen next? Will Bella bump into him and his friends? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
one: This sounds interesting. Might subscribe and even put it under JDS *read my profile to understand; it's basically like winning a Grammy, but for stories* Can't wait to read the next chapter.
I finally was able to read that last chapter and it was great. It was a well writtten and put togather story. I just wish that you got more stars becasue its plain to see that you can write.