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  • Naberrie

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    I absolutely love this.
    It's so poetic, but not
    forced. Everything is
    just so beautifully written
    and natural.
    June 14th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • violet vixen.

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    annnnddd comment virginity taken!
    hehe
    <3<3<3
    xo
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:43am
  • violet vixen.

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    FUCKING LOVE!!!!
    honestly.
    the way you worked the song into the story was truly amazing!
    this was sad, but charming. The way you wrote it, sucked me into the storyline and I found myself wanting to help Frank save Gerard.
    I can't believe it all started with a game when they were drunk!

    The speech Frank gave to Gerard was so beautiful and so full of love and truth! It hit my heart and made me tear up a bit..

    love you babey <3
    xox
    May 26th, 2011 at 12:42am
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