Soooo Can I just comment again saying that A. my name is Alyson (spelled the same :D) 2. I'd LOVE to read more so I'm subscribing if I haven't already. And C. You're a really good author. So... Yeah. :))
Hm... I like this. It sounds like it's going to be a great story. And maybe even a sad one at that. :( I wonder what's wrong with Martha? Does she have... cancer, maybe? That's just a guess, though. I'm not too sure of what she could have that makes her nose start to randomly bleed. :( But um, oh! I noticed that you have Joe and Addison in this. That's pretty neat how you're doing that. It's kind of like what an author, Sarah Dessen, has done. Like, she makes characters of her other books appear in like new ones she writes in like a cameo or something. So your's is kind of like that... unless it's just a coincidence you named Joe's fiancee Addison like in your other story. lol. Anyways, this has me intrigued already, and I really can't wait for more! :D Definitely... subscribed! :D