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  • Sunber

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    @ alice gaskarthh
    Thanks so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed it so much! To be able to get someone out of their comfort Jalex zone is a big feat! I hope you enjoy what we have so far of the sequel. And continue to enjoy it.
    May 17th, 2014 at 06:40am
  • alice gaskarthh

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    Wow wowo wow omg ik its a while since this was posted but I just need to say how amazing this story is. Its definitely in my top 10 fics maybe even 5 (and thats saying something since my otp is jalex and I rarely enjoy any other jack or alex pairings) I love the way the characters are written omfg its so perfect and alex is such an asshole but I can't help but find that funny at times. Srsly tho this fic is amazing I read it in one go. Now I'm gonna have to read the sequel :)
    May 17th, 2014 at 01:31am
  • Sunber

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    @ Rory The Roman
    Glad you liked it! :) It's definitely one of my favourites I've ever written.
    October 6th, 2012 at 12:50am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    This was brilliant. I read half of it last night and the rest today and I loved it! I have to do my homework though, because this was my excuse for not... and then I'll read the sequel!!!
    :D

    -kayt
    October 6th, 2012 at 12:03am
  • solitude115

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    I must say, I loved the ending...
    The whole story in general, it's just that your writing it's so subtle and I really really enjoyed it! <3<3
    August 11th, 2012 at 10:11am
  • nathalii47

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    read it. loved it.
    August 3rd, 2012 at 03:08am
  • Sunber

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    I loved the ending, "Right there in the middle of the airport with his Listering strips clutched tightly in his hand." I don't know why that was so cute and adorable!
    Mr. Green I liked it too. I was proud of the ending, especially since i'm significantly worse at them than beginnings.
    July 14th, 2012 at 03:35am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    I loved the ending, "Right there in the middle of the airport with his Listering strips clutched tightly in his hand." I don't know why that was so cute and adorable!
    July 14th, 2012 at 01:17am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    I loved the ending, "Right there in the middle of the airport with his Listering strips clutched tightly in his hand." I don't know why that was so cute and adorable!
    July 14th, 2012 at 01:17am
  • Tattoo

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    Awww :D
    I kinda wanted to see the sex plan haha ;D
    I can't wait to read the sequel!
    July 13th, 2012 at 09:58pm
  • Sunber

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    AWWWHHH <3 perfect ending.
    Though I wish we knew more about what happens with the sex plan :)
    This story is written in 3rd person, of COURSE you'll hear about the sex plan in the sequel Wink
    July 13th, 2012 at 02:18pm
  • sailor of the skies.

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    AWWWHHH <3 perfect ending.
    Though I wish we knew more about what happens with the sex plan :)
    July 13th, 2012 at 01:33pm
  • sailor of the skies.

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    AWWHSOCUTE<3
    I'm sad this is ending :( post the epilogue soon please!!!
    July 7th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • garrett hedlund;

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
    COME BACK TO ME SOON <3
    July 7th, 2012 at 08:47am
  • Tattoo

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    I'm really going to miss this story :(
    But I'm excited for the sequel!
    Hopefully Jack and Wyatt will still be in it ;)
    Thanks for updating <3
    July 7th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • garrett hedlund;

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    Oh Alex!
    July 2nd, 2012 at 10:27am
  • Tattoo

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    Thanks for updating <3
    July 2nd, 2012 at 02:54am
  • sailor of the skies.

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    That chapter may be my favorite. And I love how calm Jack was about it. "Oh, Alex kissed you."
    More soon please!!!
    July 1st, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • sailor of the skies.

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    The ending made my day, and it's 8:34 in the morning.
    Anyway, more soon please!!
    June 30th, 2012 at 02:33pm
  • Tattoo

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    Awww.
    Poor Wyatt.
    Thanks for updating <3
    June 30th, 2012 at 06:24am