Mr. Malicious Malfoy - Comments

Please update or at least write an ending!! Ahhhh

I just got done reading the first chapter and I have to say, I don't normally like reading HP Fanfiction with original characters not from the HP universe but this one was rather good. I like how you kept all the characters true to themselves. I also liked how Julia seems very sweet but I can tell she's no pushover. I like how she is kind of oblivious to the world of Hogwarts and what dangers and adventures await her. I also like how Draco's mind went to the girly girl comment at seeing her polished nails......it made me giggle. You have some good details in the story so well done so far.

I just got done reading the first chapter and I have to say, I don't normally like reading HP Fanfiction with original characters not from the HP universe but this one was rather good. I like how you kept all the characters true to themselves. I also liked how Julia seems very sweet but I can tell she's no pushover. I like how she is kind of oblivious to the world of Hogwarts and what dangers and adventures await her. I also like how Draco's mind went to the girly girl comment at seeing her polished nails......it made me giggle. You have some good details in the story so well done so far.

Okay...I signed up for the comment swap and when i got this book, I absolutely freaked! I know nothing about Harry Potter. I've never read the books and I've never seen the movies. If there is anything you would like me to read in turn for this crappy comment swap, then don't hesitate to ask. I'm allll for it!

Okay...I signed up for the comment swap and when i got this book, I absolutely freaked! I know nothing about Harry Potter. I've never read the books and I've never seen the movies. If there is anything you would like me to read in turn for this crappy comment swap, then don't hesitate to ask. I'm allll for it!

OH MY GOSH NO YOU NEED TO GET THEM BACK TOGETHER PLEASE UPDATE IM GOING TO CRY

STAHP PLEASE CONTINUE PLEASE PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY TOO MUCH PLEASE YOU CAN'T JUST LEAVE IT LIKE THAT WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU

I know it's been a very long time but you should update this again!
I really like this story :D

This is amazing!!! Please start writing again!! I'm hooked.

This is interesting. :)

I'm sorry to start this way, but the one thing that is driving me absolutely NUTS is the use of 'there/their/and they're's. In a nutshell, 'there' means a place, 'their' means possession, and 'they're' is a contraction of 'they are'. Sorry to start that way. Sorry, sorry.

The story is okay, although I'm not a Harry Potter fan, so I'm afraid I don't know how much help this comment might be in your opinion. It seems a little cliche, which is alright if you put some kind of twist on it, usually, but as far as a fanfic goes, I think this is cute and going in an interesting direction. Good luck on the rest! :)

I usually don't read a Harry Potter fanfic when it involves an original female character. It somehow puts me off.

I kinda like the idea of this story. It's about a girl who's trying to fit in in a new school. I can totally relate to that because I was a transfer student when I was in high school. It can be lonely especially the first few weeks when I still hadn't any friends.

However, the Draco Malfoy you portray in this story doesn't really seem like the Draco Malfoy in the series. I don't think Draco would ever be nice to anyone in their first meeting. Like, in the series, the only reason he offered his hand to Harry when they first met was because it was Harry Potter. I think, the Slytherin boys would be a total jerk when Julia wanted to sit with them. But, that's just my opinion anyway.

And also, they're supposedly the pure blood wizards. They wouldn't know anything about Twilight or Narnia because they're muggles' books. Again, that's only my opinion and this is your story so it's your world.

However, your writing style is good and it's easy to understand. I somehow don't like Julia and that's totally personal because I don't like girls who are easy to make friends because I'm totally opposite of them.

I guess I'm gonna stop with my long comment now.

^_^

I absolutely love this story! I am a huge Harry Potter fan, and always love reading Harry Potter stories. I also love Malfoy, and I loved how you wrote him in this story! I will most definitely subscribe; keep up the good work! This story is amazing!

So I could stare at the photo at the top of the screen, for like...days. It's just so beautifuls.
Now on to the story. :)
Your grammar is amazing. I am the person who always nit picks peoples grammar and mistakes, and I didn't find myself doing that with your story. I love a Draco story, he's just too adorable. So yeah. Keep up the good work! I'll be subscribing.

I enjoy how you stay true to the characters personalities. I thoroughly enjoyed the drama and what is going on. I love how it's easy to read, and there are no confusions. You have good paragraphs. I do enjoy a good Draco Malfoy story, so great job.

Ohhh man, Tom Felton just chillin' up there while unread. Goodness. As for the story, it Was very easy to read. You did well stringing it all together in a way that would make sense to the reader! I also really loved the Conductor's character. Very cute! You portrayed Malfoy, as well as his dim-witted friend very well. Definitely a good read! :)

Um, first of all, hellooo Tom Felton. Right there. Right on top of my screen... :) Second, I love this story. Such an original idea. I don't think I've ever read a Harry Potter fic that involves an American transfer. No, wait. I don't think I've ever read one that involved a transfer... maybe I just don't read them a lot. Drace seems uncharacteristically sweet. I can't tell if he's just, you know, trying to get in her pants or what, but I really like it! I'm definitely recommending it and subscribing!

First of all, happy late birthday! I hope it was awesome. Second of all, your chapter titles make me so happy. Alliteration is one of my all-time favorite things and to see 25+ chapter titles with the same sounds, well, it gets me kind of excited for grammar. I don't read Harry Potter fan-fiction very often because I find it hard to distance myself from the novels, but I think you're doing a great job with your character development while still staying true to J.K Rowling's vision for everything HP related. Happy writing! :)

I'm sort of kind of sitting on the edge with this one, because Draco's character seems so out of touch with the one J.K Rowling constructed. But of course, I'm pretty close minded when it comes to story characters and their personalities so you know, you don't have to listen to any of that.

I adore Julia's character though. She sounds wonderful. I like how sarcastic and happy (?) she is. You've got a good one with this one.

:)

all this Tom Felton Love is just killing me. I mean c'moooon. Hahaha. Look at the face. I just love Julia's character. It's making me blush about how she can make Draco feel something. Allala. I'm in love. Ooh lalala. all this feels I just couldn't take them. Hey, maybe I can make a request with you making a story about Scorpious Malfoy? Message me if you did :3