July 6th, 2011 at 04:09am
I like this story a lot. It's hard to read a fanfiction that makes the band member as a bad guy. And in this story, instead of the usual perfect boyfriend character, you made Shads an abusive boyfriend. That's a nice twist. It shows that not everybody's perfect. I notice some errors though
She felt disgusted – didn’t even look like her was acting, like her still felt something for her.
I think it's supposed to be he.
All in all it's a good story and I like it.
xoxo
Annie
I've been really busy and I'm just now getting around to judging my contest! (yikes)
Anyway, I love, love, LOVED your entry!
Definitely had a bit of a dark twist unlike most of the usual Sevenfold-fics you see on here, where most of the time the guys are portrayed as the perfect boyfriends.
Always nice to read something that's different from time to time tho, even if it is a bit darker!
I thought it was very well written, you did a truely amazing job!(: (even with a few mistakes ;) But that's ok.
Definitely one of my favs ;)
I'll try to have winners posted this weekend!