July 28th, 2013 at 04:18am
Loved the update! :)
Hm... so Marcus has a good side. One that's normal and cool and stuff. lol. I guess that side is what made Janie ever be with him.
Aw, and Torrin's dad is in a coma? That's sad. :( Hm... I wonder what this says about his character, then? He's probably a lot sweeter than he's let on, though he's shown sweetness. But sometimes he isn't when he's with Libby and all. :/
Great update! You let us know some more about the characters, so it was kind of more than a filler. :)
Can't wait for more! :D
Also I was wondering if your read mine and maybe give me some feed back??