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Fuck You Mibba! (135)

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I just found this story and read it until chapter 33 so far. My eyes hurt, because my face was stuck up in the laptop. I really love this. You two are amazing writers. First off, I love the plot of it because it is somewhat unique and realistic. It's something that can easily happen to anyone and that what makes this story really strong. Matt is a great and understanding boss and obviously had feelings for Kait way before they started to fool around with each other.

Paige sounds like a sweetheart. Luke is not in my favorite's list. I'm sure what I think of him every person who has read the story feels the same. Kait is someone that has gone through a lot and it is shown through the story. You managed to use vivid descriptive and detailed words to show every person's emotions and feelings and it is something amazing to read. It gives the reader a vivid imagination/visualization. The words drew me more and more in and I didn't want to stop reading,l until my headache kicked in, but it doesn't mean that I will stop. I wanted to comment first and once I continued to read and maybe finish and keep up with the rest I'll comment again.

I'm glad she decided to leave him and press charges.

Great story!

July 13th, 2014 at 08:08pm

mollymoshpit; (100)

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I absolutely loved this story!! Any chances of a sequel?

April 23rd, 2013 at 11:21pm

Its_RobynXo (100)

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Loved it!

October 8th, 2012 at 08:00am

riellybabie101 (100)

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great update!

October 5th, 2012 at 07:56pm

Nia_Flores (100)

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So glad this was updated. Such a cute chapter!

October 5th, 2012 at 07:46am

MoMo_92 (100)

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Love the chapte it was cute and filled with fluff, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

October 4th, 2012 at 10:14am

Fictional.Reality (100)

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Awe how adorable! This was a very fluff filled chapter and I loved it very much so. One question, is this the end?
<3 Michele

October 4th, 2012 at 03:06am

SynysterxSavannah (100)

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Awwweee<3

October 4th, 2012 at 02:42am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Please update soon!

October 4th, 2012 at 02:29am

XtremeFairy (100)

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Yay I'm so happy they finally married :D
Amazing update

October 4th, 2012 at 02:25am

Its_RobynXo (100)

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Cute update! <3

July 31st, 2012 at 06:05am

Nia_Flores (100)

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Aww... they got married!!! Sooo cute!

July 27th, 2012 at 08:09am

SynysterxSavannah (100)

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Loved it! <3

July 27th, 2012 at 02:25am

riellybabie101 (100)

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great update!

July 27th, 2012 at 02:12am

NikkiFoxy8 (100)

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Thank you for the update! I love the wedding! I have been waiting forever for them to get married! I can't wait for them to try to have another little baby! Please update soon!

July 26th, 2012 at 11:24pm

MoMo_92 (100)

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Love it the weddin was beautiful, Paige was cute, and now Matt and Kait r finally married and it's goin to last for a lifetime, just love this story, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

July 26th, 2012 at 08:04pm