this is scary (i mean everything scares me so...) but i like it...im scared shit it's one in the morning...ahhhh i wont be able to sleep =( it'll be worth it tho...
Okay, I can....deal with that. But if Robbie dies I'm never speaking to you again. I swear it. I can't believe they haven't figured it out yet. I also can't believe he was so calm about all of that. Like, damn.
And I like that little interruption part. It reminded me that he was actually telling a story.
Okay, I literally just got around to reading that last chapter and didn't even notice the new one till just now.
So, Ace really isn't bad at all. I really hope he doesn't fuck this up again. And I want her to be okay! If she turns into a zombie I'll scream.
AND NEITHER ONE OF THOSE CHAPTERS SUCKED! Jeez. The new picture of Chris looks like that one dude from The Rocky Horror Picture Show. Especially with the shorts and all ;D
I forgot to remind you again >.> O.O Another zombie?!?! Yes? No? Probably yes. Don't you dare let Chrissy get eaten... I'm actually warming up to Ace too. I mean, hell yes, he made some pretty heavy mistakes. But at least he realized it and is trying to make it at least a little better.
I was looking through my subscriptions and I saw this one again and I thought to myself, 'Why, self, don't you remember you love this story?!' And so here I am. Y'know, I'm actually warming up a little to Ace. But just a little. I'm not at lukewarm yet, but he isn't so bad. Hrm... What to say, what to say... Welp. I like Chris and Robbie. A lot. :3 Day is okay. Dunno much about him yet. As far as the other characters go, perhaps we need some more on them, ja?
I forgot to remind you D: Next time, remind me to remind you! Anyway, I now understand why I hate Ace. I didn't get it at first but now I do. I'm surprised Chris stayed with him. Like, hella surprised. At least he cares about his daughter(?) enough to call her and whatnot. But yeah. Go Chris!
Oh, trust me. I'll remind you. I can't believe this actually happened! Like, holy fuck. They didn't even know it was a zombie! They're just going around and killing people! Holy shit I love it. And that last part with Ace? Pure lush.
I love Robbie! He's so cute. :3 Ace on the other hand, not so much. I'm curious as to know what he did though. Did he cheat on Chris? That'd be a crappy thing to do. Anywho, I'm excited for the next chapter!
I certainly love you sooooooo much. I still hate Ace. Good job with his duchiness. This is just going to be the main source of my comments by the way. How much Ace doesn't deserve what he has >.>
Zombies!!!!! Heck, yeah! I'm all up for a zombie story. :D And it's well written and it flows quite nicely. I applaud you. I'll be tuning in for more. Believe me. It's good.
I'm impressed with this. I like the simple but important details that is all it is made up of, and it's an exciting beginning that gets right to the story and doesn't drag on about the past or the characters. I like it.