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  • MamaZ

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    well it was fun while it lasted, the editors take a while so i'll miss you and this story.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 05:20pm
  • psycho_cinderella

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    :/ so you're not going to be posting for months? :( sad times, I got reported like january time and I'm still waiting on the editors... :(

    Damnnnnn.
    June 22nd, 2011 at 02:51pm
  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Oh shit so much going on from her being punished to punching Syn. I absolutely looooooved it all. I so can't wait to see about the life mate thing and how the relationship with Syn and Lissi goes.
    June 21st, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • lizicea7x

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    well i always saw it as a little sexual tension more than hate between them
    what happened exactly with her mother
    June 21st, 2011 at 09:19pm
  • KellShadows

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    up-date again soon! =)
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:44pm
  • hachie

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    Whooo she kissed him!!!
    I mean the sexual tension is just building up between the both of them since Rose has found out that she life mate with Shadows.
    So she wants to have sex with him but she would die because she hates his guts.
    Man she has a lot of balls to punch Syn like that and say those things to him about him killing his life mate.
    Syn should compose himself more, since he has been absent almost all of Rose's life and she is right he doesn't know her at all.
    I cannot wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 21st, 2011 at 08:16pm
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    so i really really realy love this story :)
    its pretty kickass XD
    ohh and i did notice that cole in her house giving her coffee thing :P
    LOVE THIS XD
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:35pm
  • hmc09

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    Great chapter :)
    June 21st, 2011 at 05:02pm
  • MamaZ

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    Shads really needs to stop hitting her and Syn really needs to get on the ball and get to know his daughter.
    June 21st, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • Norma J

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    This is a really intresting plot and intresting story!
    I love it but I must ask if this an M. Shadows love story when's the romance going to come into play?
    June 21st, 2011 at 07:48am
  • FictionisTrue12

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    love it :) can't wait for "shadows" to stop being an ass and for the girl liz to finally forget who she was and accept who she is
    June 21st, 2011 at 03:16am
  • hachie

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    Wow so right now she is just lost right now.
    I mean she can't trust anyone since she has been lied to all her life.
    Finding out she is really Syn's daughter, Cole has lied to her and that she is Shadow's mate too.
    And the only person she trusts right now is Deim since she doesn't show her any pity because of Rose found out about her true identity.
    So Diem is going to drag her off to go shopping to help her get Rose of her funk!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 20th, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • hmc09

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    im excited for her to talk to matt..
    June 20th, 2011 at 10:42pm
  • lizicea7x

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    yes things when you know that your past isnĀ“t as clear as the one everyone else has and you dont know it exactly is sooo confusing
    June 20th, 2011 at 08:12pm
  • MamaZ

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    It's nice to really see that lis has a friend that truly is there for her
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:44pm
  • Brina

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    can't wait for the next chapter, it's an amazing story
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:06pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Amazing!!!!! <3

    All she really wants is the truth. I feel so sorry for her.
    June 20th, 2011 at 07:32am
  • hmc09

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    Really great 2 chapters :)
    June 19th, 2011 at 11:43pm
  • psycho_cinderella

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    I feel soo sorry for her... She's having a pretty rough time.
    Is syn actually going to kill Cole for her? :)
    June 19th, 2011 at 10:34pm
  • MamaZ

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    damn...that's all i can really say
    June 19th, 2011 at 10:19pm